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		<title>Eight pretty obvious questions for comics creators</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Jul 2010 11:00:46 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>javen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Some specific to print comics, and some of them apply to all mediums.
But the point is that putting aside a little time to think about your audience and your medium of choice is a good idea.
Links

Eight Questions for Comics Creators
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Some specific to print comics, and some of them apply to all mediums.</p>
<p>But the point is that putting aside a little time to think about your audience and your medium of choice is a good idea.</p>
<h3>Links</h3>
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<p><a href="http://techland.com/2010/05/21/emanata-eight-questions-for-comics-creators/">Eight Questions for Comics Creators</a></p>
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		<title>What is a MacGuffin?  Hitchcock answers.</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Jul 2010 11:00:13 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>javen</dc:creator>
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McGuffin by Hitchcock from isaac niemand on Vimeo.
Links

McGuffin by Hitchcock via John August
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<p><a href="http://vimeo.com/12375002">McGuffin by Hitchcock</a> from <a href="http://vimeo.com/user3889173">isaac niemand</a> on <a href="http://vimeo.com">Vimeo</a>.</p>
<h3>Links</h3>
<hr />
<p><a href="http://vimeo.com/12375002">McGuffin by Hitchcock</a> via <a href="http://johnaugust.com/archives/2010/hitchcock-on-macguffins">John August</a></p>
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		<title>Interview with Peter Cullen, voice of Optimus Prime</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Jul 2010 11:00:19 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>javen</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Creativity / Productivity]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[Very interesting interview about developing the voice for the character.
Terrific voice actor.  One of my favorites.  
Links

Audio Q&#038;A: Peter Cullen, the Voice of Optimus Prime, Talks Transformers, Mario and More

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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Very interesting interview about developing the voice for the character.</p>
<p>Terrific voice actor.  One of my favorites.  </p>
<h3>Links</h3>
<hr />
<p><a href="http://www.wired.com/gamelife/2010/06/optimus-prime/?utm_source=feedburner&amp;utm_medium=feed&amp;utm_campaign=Feed%3A+wired%2Findex+%28Wired%3A+Index+3+%28Top+Stories+2%29%29">Audio Q&#038;A: Peter Cullen, the Voice of Optimus Prime, Talks Transformers, Mario and More<br />
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		<title>Neil Cross on Dialogue</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jun 2010 11:00:52 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>javen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Pretty good little article on what makes good dialogue.
&#8220;Anyone can write a bunch of talking, but talking isn’t dialogue. Like every other word in your novel, dialogue is there to do a job — a number of jobs, in fact. It needs to move the story forward, to give information, to intensify characterisation. Ideally, it [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Pretty good little article on what makes good dialogue.</p>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;Anyone can write a bunch of talking, but talking isn’t dialogue. Like every other word in your novel, dialogue is there to do a job — a number of jobs, in fact. It needs to move the story forward, to give information, to intensify characterisation. Ideally, it should do all three at once.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<h3>Links</h3>
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<p><a href="http://www.neil-cross.com/on-dialogue/">On Dialogue</a></p>
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		<title>Some writing advice:  &#8220;Write drunk; edit sober&#8221;</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Jun 2010 11:00:06 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>javen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[One or two nuggets of interest in this little Happiness Project interview with Larry Smith, editor of SMITH Magazine.
 “Write drunk, edit sober.” Not that you should actually be drunk (the inebriated writer is a silly, antiquated idea, among other things), but that you should just get the words down whether you’re writing a letter, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One or two nuggets of interest in this little Happiness Project interview with Larry Smith, editor of SMITH Magazine.</p>
<blockquote><p> “Write drunk, edit sober.” Not that you should actually be drunk (the inebriated writer is a silly, antiquated idea, among other things), but that you should just get the words down whether you’re writing a letter, a report for work, or the story of your life, in six words or 60,000. Put the words down, don’t obsess over them, just effusively spill them down onto the page. Then step away—for an hour, a day, a week, whatever you need. And then edit. Edit like crazy. Be hard on words and yourself and make it better. And when you think you’re finished, edit it one more time.</p></blockquote>
<h3>Links</h3>
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<p><a href="http://www.happiness-project.com/happiness_project/2010/05/write-drunk-edit-sober-drink-coffee-while-reading-the-paper-watch-the-cat.html">&#8220;Write Drunk, Edit Sober; Drink Coffee While Reading the Paper; Watch the Cat.&#8221;</a></p>
<p><a href="http://www.smithmag.net/">SMITH Magazine</a></p>
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		<title>Scene-based writing (featuring Scriviner)</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Jun 2010 11:00:14 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>javen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Clay Moore posts a quick little description of a way to approach writing your fiction.
What i am proposing is not that you throw out the Chapter system at all. Rather I want you to think of your story as a collection of scenes, as if you were playing out the movie of your story in [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Clay Moore posts a quick little description of a way to approach writing your fiction.</p>
<blockquote><p>What i am proposing is not that you throw out the Chapter system at all. Rather I want you to think of your story as a collection of scenes, as if you were playing out the movie of your story in your head. Each scene can then be completely mapped out. You know who are in the scene, and the goal is for each character in that scene. You get all the pre-think done, and then do the writing. I find that my characters are better behaved.</p>
<p> This scene technique has worked wonders with my own writing. When I have a complicated plot, this technique helps with keeping the plots straight.</p>
<p>Another benefit to this scene based system is that I can see where I am lacking in the book. A character may suddenly appear and I need a scene to introduce that character.</p>
</blockquote>
<p>This approach is very similar to how I write my comics.  </p>
<h3>Links</h3>
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<p><a href="http://clayssite.com/2010/05/06/using-the-scene-method-with-scrivener/">Using the Scene writing method with Scrivener</a></p>
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		<title>The Bechdel Test:  Representation of  women in popular entertainment</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Jun 2010 11:00:13 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>javen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[John August is one of the latest to bring up the Bechdel test in his screenwriting blog.

Screenwriters: Think back over the scripts you’ve written, and ask yourself three questions about each one:

	Are there two or more female characters with names?
Do they talk to each other?
If they talk to each other, do they talk about something [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John August is one of the latest to bring up <a href="http://alisonbechdel.blogspot.com/2005/08/rule.html">the Bechdel test</a> in his screenwriting blog.</p>
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<p>Screenwriters: Think back over the scripts you’ve written, and ask yourself three questions about each one:</p>
<ol>
<li>	Are there two or more female characters with names?</li>
<li>Do they talk to each other?</li>
<li>If they talk to each other, do they talk about something other than a man?
</li>
</ol>
</blockquote>
<p>In my own recent stuff, Q-Burger fails, but I think The Winchcombe passes. Barely.  </p>
<h3>Links</h3>
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<a href="http://johnaugust.com/archives/2010/women-in-film">Women in film</a></p>
<p><a href="http://alisonbechdel.blogspot.com/2005/08/rule.html">The Rule</a></p>
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		<title>Vonnegut on story: Cinderella or Kafka’s cockroach?</title>
		<link>http://www.javenackerman.com/2010/05/vonnegut-on-story-cinderella-or-kafka%e2%80%99s-cockroach/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 26 May 2010 11:00:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>javen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A master gives a classroom lecture on story.
I want to share with you something I’ve learned. I’ll draw it on the blackboard behind me so you can follow more easily [draws a vertical line on the blackboard]. This is the G-I axis: good fortune-ill fortune. Death and terrible poverty, sickness down here—great prosperity, wonderful health [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A master gives a classroom lecture on story.</p>
<blockquote><p>I want to share with you something I’ve learned. I’ll draw it on the blackboard behind me so you can follow more easily [draws a vertical line on the blackboard]. This is the G-I axis: good fortune-ill fortune. Death and terrible poverty, sickness down here—great prosperity, wonderful health up there. Your average state of affairs here in the middle [points to bottom, top, and middle of line respectively].</p>
<p>This is the B-E axis. B for beginning, E for entropy. Okay. Not every story has that very simple, very pretty shape that even a computer can understand [draws horizontal line extending from middle of G-I axis].</p>
<p>Now let me give you a marketing tip. The people who can afford to buy books and magazines and go to the movies don’t like to hear about people who are poor or sick, so start your story up here [indicates top of the G-I axis]. You will see this story over and over again. People love it, and it is not copyrighted. The story is “Man in Hole,” but the story needn’t be about a man or a hole. It’s: somebody gets into trouble, gets out of it again [draws line A]. It is not accidental that the line ends up higher than where it began. This is encouraging to readers.</p></blockquote>
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<h3>Links</h3>
<p><a href="http://www.laphamsquarterly.org/voices-in-time/kurt-vonnegut-at-the-blackboard.php?page=all">Kurt Vonnegut at the Blackboard</a></p>
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		<title>Using the dash in your writing and on the web</title>
		<link>http://www.javenackerman.com/2010/05/using-the-dash-in-your-writing-and-on-the-web/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 17 May 2010 11:00:07 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>javen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Layers.com has a nice little article that sums up the problems that the dash and its variants present to the average writer and web folk.
After quotation marks, dashes are the most abused characters in the typographic stable. Dashes have visual, typographical roles as well as grammatical ones. These modest characters fall under the sway of [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Layers.com has a nice little article that sums up the problems that the dash and its variants present to the average writer and web folk.</p>
<blockquote><p>After quotation marks, dashes are the most abused characters in the typographic stable. Dashes have visual, typographical roles as well as grammatical ones. These modest characters fall under the sway of both copy editors and typesetters, and using them correctly depends on knowing a bit of both disciplines. By the end of this article, you’ll be a bona fide dashmeister.</p></blockquote>
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<h3>Links</h3>
<p><a href="http://layersmagazine.com/the-art-of-type-dash-away-all.html">The Art of Type: Dash away all</a></p>
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		<title>Agatha Christie&#8217;s notebooks:  Intricate plot from absolute chaos</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 12 May 2010 11:00:51 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>javen</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A great article from the Slate reviewing John Curran&#8217;s  Agatha Christie&#8217;s Secret Notebooks.
 The contents of the notebooks are as multi-dimensional as their Escher-like structure. They include fully worked-out scenes, historical background, lists of character names, rough maps of imaginary places, stage settings, an idle rebus (the numeral three, a crossed-out eye, and a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A great article from the Slate reviewing John Curran&#8217;s  <em>Agatha Christie&#8217;s Secret Notebooks.</em></p>
<blockquote><p> The contents of the notebooks are as multi-dimensional as their Escher-like structure. They include fully worked-out scenes, historical background, lists of character names, rough maps of imaginary places, stage settings, an idle rebus (the numeral three, a crossed-out eye, and a mouse), and plot ideas that will be recognizable to any Christie fan: “Poirot asks to go down to country—finds a house and various fantastic details,” “Saves her life several times,” “Inquire enquire—both in same letter.” What’s more, in between ominous scraps like “Stabbed through eye with hatpin” and “influenza depression virus—Stolen? Cabinet Minister?” are grocery lists: “Newspapers, toilet paper, salt, pepper …” There was no clean line between Christie’s work life and her family life. She created household ledgers, and scribbled notes to self. (“All away weekend—can we go Thursday Nan.”) Even Christie’s second husband, the archeologist Sir Max Mallowan, used her notebooks. He jotted down calculations. Christie’s daughter Rosalind practiced penmanship, and the whole family kept track of their bridge scores alongside notes like, “Possibilities of poison … cyanide in strawberry … coniine—in capsule?”
</p></blockquote>
<p>Fascinating stuff.</p>
<hr />
<h3>Links</h3>
<p><a href="http://www.slate.com/id/2249306/pagenum/all">The Mystery of the Messy Notebooks &#8211; Why Agatha Christie&#8217;s method was utterly deranged.<br />
</a></p>
<p><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0061988367?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=qburg-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=9325&#038;creativeASIN=0061988367">Agatha Christie&#8217;s Secret Notebooks: Fifty Years of Mysteries in the Making</a><img src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=qburg-20&#038;l=as2&#038;o=1&#038;a=0061988367" width="1" height="1" border="0" alt="" style="border:none !important; margin:0px !important;" /></p>
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